“Behold, a bottled blaze
surprisingly survives:
alive without air,
fed without fuel!”
The merchant smiles slyly,
curious customers crowd close,
the illicit illusion lingers.
A profitable pursuit,
this arcane trickery trade.
A wizard’s generous gift
at considerably low cost:
a bauble to brag about!
Image credit: Alexas_Fotos
This poem was inspired by dVerse’s quadrille prompt: blaze
A quadrille is a poem that is exactly 44 words long.
Awesome 👏🏼
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Thanks, Sadje 😊
The merchant sees your interest in the curio, and suggests that it may make a lovely centerpiece for a living room table – perhaps *your* living room table?
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Age old selling technique.
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😜😁😉
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Nothing sells better to those who are willing to be tricked.
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So true!
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Very good Nicole. A good salesperson can spot a potential mark from a distance. 😊
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Thanks, Nigel 😊
Indeed, they can!
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You’re welcome, Nicole. 🙏
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Like moths to the fire, they will come! I enjoyed the alliteration and word choices here. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
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Thanks, Mish 😊
Also, thanks for a great prompt!
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“The illicit illusion lingers” stood out for me. A fun read.
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Thanks, Maria 😊
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Enjoyed your quadrille! Slight of hand, the shell trick … all of them … a sucker born every day. Illicit illusion indeed.
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Thanks, Helen 😊
Gotta keep on your toes around some types.
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Very, very imaginative, Nicole ~ this is a fun read, and (I assume) a fun write!
~David
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Thanks, David 😊
It sure was fun to write!
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Magicians in hiding have their way. Nice write, Nicole
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Thanks, Jim 😊
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I love all the alliteration…what a cool trick! Awesome tale, Nicole! 💞💞💞
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Thanks, Dawn 😊
Even if it’s just an illusion, it would still be neat to see.
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Step right up, ladies and gentlemen! This vendor knows of what they speak!
This was a fun read, Nicole 🙂
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Thanks, Dale 😊
“And if this particular product somehow doesn’t interest you, I do have some lovely snake oil…”
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Indeed. Have no fear, we have what you don’t need!
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This is excellent, with lots of alliteration. The image is cool too!
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Thanks, Mary 😊
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