They met up in a café. Jolene arrived first, and calmly waited for Gloria, who arrived five minutes late and out of breath. “Gloria, you’re always on the run now,” Jolene laughed. A text lit up Gloria’s phone. “Running after somebody,” Jolene noted.
Gloria sighed. “You could have your choice of men, but… He’s the only one for me, Jolene.”
“Will you catch him on the rebound? I hear he’s officially single again, and… Oh, he’s outside!”
Gloria dashed out of the café, and shyly approached him. “Here I go again… Hi! Why did I ever let you go?”
This story was inspired by Charli’s March 6, 2023, prompt on Carrot Ranch: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about Gloria. You can name a character that comes to you as Gloria or you can interpret the Laura Branigan song into a story. What image comes to you? Go where the prompt leads!
I decided to included lyrics from Laura Branigan’s song Gloria, as well as lyrics from Dolly’s Parton’s song Jolene, and Abba’s song Momma Mia.
I love that your other character is named “Jolene.” Def Dolly-approved!
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Thanks, Liz! I wasn’t sure that I was going to be able to pull off quoting lyrics from three different songs in only 99 words, but I am so thrilled that I did.
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You da Woman!
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😁💃
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Glad she found her man 🙂 Lovely payoff ending!
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Thanks, Tom. It’s nice to put a positive spin on these songs.
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I didn’t catch the included lyrics until a second read – very nicely done! 🙂
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I love the interchange between Gloria and Jolene.
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Thanks, Frank. The lyrics from those two songs worked surprisingly well for a conversation.
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Well done Elizabeth
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Sorry Nichole 😅
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Haha 😄 No worries, Sadje
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😍
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Brilliant! Love all the lyrics blended it.
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Thanks! I did feel rather clever after writing it.
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As you should!
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Ha! Now I have Jolene and Gloria stuck in my head. (Didn’t catch the Abba) Well done, and fun!
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Thanks! 😃
The Abba lines are at the end: “[Mama Mia]
Here I go again!
[Why] why
Did I let you go?”
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Now I know! Good job on incorporating all those lyrics.
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Thanks! It was a fun extra challenge that I placed on myself.
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