The building was a remarkable feat of architecture, towering over the small figures standing at its base, and stood out dramatically compared to the rest of the city around it. The citizens had rushed out of their homes to observe it, and began talking in hushed whispers about what its presence, and the precedent it had set, would mean for the future of their neighborhoods. They should have been surprised when the previous tower that had stood on the same plot of land was demolished to make way for this new one; once, they had shuddered, and wondered what possibly could be next, but not anymore. The absolute chaos that ensued when the head of city planning decided he didnβt need any permits to rearrange things meant that ever since nowhere in their city was safe from sudden changes, and oh boy, he sure was willing to make drastic changes on a whim.
βHey Tommy, is this what you made for that big project in school?β the mother of the city planner asked, examining the new building. For an art class craft, created from sticks, hot glue, paper, paste, and paint, it was certainly remarkable just how realistic the medieval cathedral looked when placed in the town of Lego people and their blocky buildings.
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This story was written in response to these prompts:
GirlieOnTheEdge’s Six Sentence Story: paste
Pensitivity101’s Three Things Challenge: permit, shudder, rush
Fandango’s One Word Challenge: remarkable
Inspired response Nicole. Thanks for the inclusion
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Thanks! It’s been a while since I’ve used the 3TC prompts, but I’d like to get back to using them semi-regularly.
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Always welcome!
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Great twist ending that gives such a charming perspective on it π
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Thanks! It was fun building up the first half as terrifyingly chaotic, then zooming out for the fuller picture.
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I like the ending when I found out the notorious city planner who no longer needed permits was a child, Tommy, building a school project.
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Thanks, Frank π I was hoping to catch people up with the first paragraph, then shock them with the second one.
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That was a fun twist, well done!
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Thanks, Mimi π
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Haha! Good one Nichole.
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Thanks Sadje π
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Youβre welcome
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The fun of playing with perspectives/perceptions!
Well built, Nicole.
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Thanks, Nick. π It’s so much fun playing with them.
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Love it. I Didn’t see that coming, Nicole, and I love Lego! I can imagine how that crafted cathedral looked among all those colourful bricks π
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Good! I love doing my job correctly, hehe. Thanks, Ford π
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Brilliant, love the way it ended!
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Thanks, Keith π
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Tommy has a great future.
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He certainly does.
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Delightfully creative.
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Thank you π
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Nice twist! Love it.
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Thanks, Bridgette π
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Awww, adorable ending!
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Thanks π
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