The path hugged the side of the cliff, a narrow strip just wide enough for one person, bordered by solid rock on one side and open air on the other, and provided a clear bird’s eye view of the village in the valley.
Vandra was forced to admit to herself that having an affinity for heights in the forest and being comfortable climbing the tall oaks of her hometown did not directly translate into being comfortable on a rocky ledge in unfamiliar territory; although she could adeptly perceive whether a thin branch was sturdy enough to hold her weight, she could not identity what was soft or hard rock, and whether the edge would crumble if she stepped too forcefully on it, a concern that was bolstered by chunks of hard dirt cascading down the cliff face from up above.
She froze in fear, uncertain if the path had just become dangerous, trying to clutch at the smooth rock wall beside her for support, and wished that she had not scoffed at the idea of having a dwarven guide lead her across this treacherous path, even if her elvish pride was loath to admit it.
It wasn’t much further to the end of the ledge where the path broadened out and where there were even some small trees between the path and the precipice – a mere few steps separated her from where she would feel secure again, but they were steps she’d have to make carefully to avoid slipping on the loose dirt that now dusted the ledge.
If she could deftly cross a mossy fallen tree trunk, damp and slippery from the spray from a waterfall below, across a chasm, she should have the balance to cross this ledge, and the dexterity to deal with any adjustments she’d be forced to make to prevent her from falling, so she would count down from three and then…
A hill dwarf ambled down the section of path she was headed towards, waited expectedly for a moment, then nonchalantly strode onto the narrow ledge, grasped her hand and lead her off it while muttering, “It’s not good manners to block the path,” to her deep chagrin.
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This story was written in response to GirlieOnTheEdges’s Six Sentence Story prompt: lead
Great fish-out-of-water story & loved that twist ending that deflates the suspense! 🙂
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She learned her lesson, all right, haha.
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As someone who isn’t keen on narrow heights, the tension really works well here 🙂
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Nothing hurt but perhaps her pride, that’s what is important.
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That’s very true, Mimi.
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Those dwarven feet must be much more nimble than they look! Great storytelling, Nicole. You had me on the edge of my seat and the humorous close was all the more appreciated!
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Thanks, Dora 🙂
The hill dwarfs who live at these heights know the stone really well and can tell whether it’s safe or crumbling without needing to put their weight on it. It’s their knowledge of the stone that gives them their confidence. The mountain dwarfs who live inside the mountain caverns wouldn’t be so comfortable up there.
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Ah, gotcha! Now that explains a lot. And adds to the story’s imaginative appeal.
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Nice description of that treacherous height. I wouldn’t want to be on it. I like how the narrowness of the path meant she blocked the way which led her to getting help.
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Thanks, Frank. I was hoping that the high level of danger would come across accurately.
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Elderberry Tea and this story…they match so well, like a Hobbit smoking Halfling’s Leaf from Shire!
Which is another way to say, Nicole, that your sculpting of the words really shines out, the storytelling is enchanting and the humor is ever present.
What more can anyone ask?
Intrigued to read your future publications.
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Thanks, Nick! 😊😃
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I was on edge (pardon the pun) all the way until I discovered that lovely ending!
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Thanks, Keith 🙂 And feel free to intend the pun! 😉
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I hear those dwarves are sticklers for protocol!
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When there are so many one way passages, they need to be.
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This was so descriptive my fingers hurt gripping the smooth ledge. Glad for her that her pride didn’t goeth before a fall.
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Thanks! I’m glad to hear that it was so evocative.
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Well, dwarves have a lower center of gravity, I suppose! Great ending!
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That is true, theirs is lower. Thanks for reading 🙂
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And I’ll bet that dwarf was keeping an eye on her all the time, before stepping in with a grumpy but needed assist.
Nice comic flip at the end of a delightfully intense scene!
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Thanks, Liz. They could tell that she didn’t have the expertise she tried to pretend that she did.
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What a delightful story! The dwarf made me chuckle 🙂
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Thanks, Bridgette 😃
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