It was mid-afternoon when Jaclyn loaded the final box, and closed the back of the van. She went through the house one last time, checking for anything forgotten, turning off lights, and closing doors.
She swung up into the cab of the moving van, which was noticeably higher off the ground than her car. She’d be used it by the time she was half-way across the province though. She texted her husband, typed her destination into Google Maps, and turned on the van. “Hit the road, Jack,” played on the radio.
She laughed, and sang, “Don’t you come back.”
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Inspired by this prompt from the Carrot Ranch Literary Community: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “hit the road, Jack.” You can interpret the phrase any way you like — road trip, goodbye, or story. Go where the prompt leads!
“and closing doors”
And she has opened one and is driving a big ass moving van through it! She’ll get used to that big step up and more.
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“When one door closes, another one will open.”
I’m glad you picked up on the reference!
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You worked great life messages into this story of moving on. I appreciate she’ll get used to the difference in step. Well done, Nicole.
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Thanks, Charli 🙂
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A fresh move a bug step into the cab and her new life. Love the metaphore. Great job.
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Thanks!
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