The captain peered over his map, occasionally glancing up to check if the shoreline he could just make out through the mist matched anything. His ship had been blown off course by an unexpected storm last night, but he wasn’t ready to admit they were lost yet.
“Captain, we just fished up a mysterious barrel filled with old letters.”
He spun around. A derelict ship emerged from the mist. Cold sweat beaded the captain’s brow, and a moment later shots were fired from the ghost ship’s cannons.
“Turn this ship around, boys. Turn around and run!” the captain cried.
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This story was inspired by the Carrot Ranch prompt for March 20, 2023: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about shots fired. Where is this story taking place? Is there urgency or surprise? Who is there? What happens next? Go where the prompt leads!
Great slow buildup of unease here. Cracking story, Nicole! ๐
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Thanks, Tom ๐
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Good one Nichole.
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Thanks, Sadje ๐
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Youโre welcome
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This is great, Nicole. I can feel the Captain’s angst.
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Thanks, Sue! ๐
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I felt the strong urge to flee myself! Nicely written, Nicole! ๐ ๐ ๐
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Thanks, Dawn! ๐
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I liked your mystical ghost ship forewarning the Captain with cannon shots.
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Thanks! I imagine the Flying Dutchman thinks it’s more fun if they give the other ship a small head start in the chase.
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Who doesn’t love a good pirate tale? Well done!
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Arrr… Thank ye matey!
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