She carefully preened herself in the mirror, making sure that her hair was sleek and smooth, her eyeshadow shimmery, and her lashes long and fluttery, before she finally descended the staircase. It was only right to make sure that she was looking her best for such a special occasion.
It was 5:57, and he had said he would be there at 6:00. Sure enough, just as the antique grandfather clock in the parlor chimed the changing hour, the doorbell rang; he was perfectly punctual, as expected.
She half hoped that he would escort her to one of the fancy dining establishments in the swanky section of the downtown, but it was no surprise at all when he drove past that entire area and continued on into the grittier part of town, finally parking in front of The Roxton Shooting Range, where her superhero training would begin. After all, this was her date with Destiny.
This story was inspired by the prompt that Denise (GirlieOnTheEdge) gave for this week’s Six Sentence Story: date
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Fab sixer, Nicole! Loved the ending π
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Thanks, Paula. π It was fun writing the build up to that last line.
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Great buildup with that unexpected twist at the end π Had me in the first half, ngl.
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Yesss, I did my job correctly! Glad that the twist was indeed unexpected.
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“Half-hoped,” eh? The greatest life adventures sometimes have the most inauspicious beginnings.
What we won’t do for men…uffda!
Clever six, Nicole!
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Well, it seemed kinda logical to her that he wouldn’t make her start training on an empty stomach… π
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Nice turn at the end from a romantic diner date to the beginning of superhero training.
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Thanks, Frank. π
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Exciting Beginning Nichole.
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Thanks, Sadje π
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Youβre welcome
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She’ll have plenty of time for fine dining when she’s trained and operational!
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That she will.
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Love the twist, Nicole (obviously, I would! π) I’m sure she’d forget all about her half-hoped for date once her training began!
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Thanks, Tom π. If she works hard, then she’ll get to play hard, and then she can go to the absolute swankiest place if she wants to.
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That’s true for all of us, actually! π
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Very well done! Nothing says a superhero can’t look beautiful while doing the job, too.
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Precisely! That’s what Marvel movies say, at the very least.
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Love the twist! π
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Thanks, Dawn! π
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You integrate seamlessly the ” mirror room” technique in your stories, Nicole.
Lock & loaded revolver you’ve got here…six bullets, if I am not mistaken.
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Thanks, Nick! *steps to the side to research the mirror room technique* Yayoi Kusama’s “Infinity Mirrors” sound awesome, and I’d love to go experience seeing that exhibit. I do love to work with repetition to reveal deeper layers, or using a twist to make people reread and see new perspectives.
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* funny thing I don’t know if there is actually such a term as far as writing goes π- I took the liberty to use it from arts*
That love of yours…shows.
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I love the date with destiny. Interesting use of the word, not where I was expecting it to go.
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Thanks, Anne. π
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Well, that brought a smile to my face, Nicole.
I went exactly where you were leading us, lol
Love surprise endings!
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Thanks, Denise π
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What an incredible story! I love how you take us on a journey with the protagonist, from the moment she preens in front of the mirror to the unexpected destination for her date. It’s definitely a unique twist on a classic storyline!
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Thank you, Claire! π
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