Outside the car window, everything disappeared in a blur – trees, mailboxes, cornfields, small towns, even state lines – as Sasha journeyed across the American Midwest with her Mom and younger brother. It was an unexpected trip; Mom had packed up all of their stuff last evening while they were at sleepovers at friends’ houses and Dad was out drinking like usual, then when they had both returned this morning she told them to jump straight into the car, overnight bags and all, and they were gone.
As they passed through yet another quaint village with gorgeous old buildings, the type of place that gave off warm cozy vibes, Sasha asked if they were going for a weekend trip in one of these towns. Before her brother was born, very once in a while, her mom used to spontaneously decide that they were going out for a mother-daughter day, and they would find a town that they’d never been to before, walk around and explore it, not returning home until after the sun had set, her mom wistfully sighing as they drove back, saying she wished they could stay the whole weekend.
Her mom wiped away a rebellious tear that escaped her eye, also wiping away some of the makeup covering a bruise, and replied that they were going to see Gramma and Gramps in Seattle. They’d made the road trip as a family across the country a few times before throughout Sasha’s life, but they had always broken up the long drive with small detours to sightseeing locations, taking at least an hour to stretch their legs – this time, with the exception of the occasional stop sign and a fast food lunch, her mother’s foot never left the gas pedal.
This story was written in response to this week’s Six Sentence Story prompt from Denise (GirlieOnTheEdge): blur
Great gradual buildup of the toxic marriage they’re escaping from – mum’s eagerness to keep moving, the abuse she’s hiding. Powerful story, Nicole ❤
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Thanks, Tom. Eventually, the straw does break the camel’s back.
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May things work out for Sasha and her mother and may her father get over the drinking addiction.
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It would be truly wonderful if he went into rehab, recovered, and their family could be healthily back together again.
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A trip too many women (and even some men) have had to make to protect the children from worse. Very moving.
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Thank you, Mimi. It’s sad that this is reality for so many people.
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She planned her escape well. Hope the grandparents are ready. Or maybe she stops and stays in one of the side trips?
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I wrote it with the idea that she had told them what was going on, and they were the ones to encourage her to leave and get over to them asap
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The pain and freedom of separation…
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I can only imagine what a woman in that situation is all going through.
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True.
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Your story reminds me of how I love to do spontaneous things. Honk your horn and I will drop everything and climb in.
Unfortunately I am married to someone who needs to plan before doing. But we are a good mix.
Fortunately – he doesn’t mind my impulsiveness and is happy to see me happy when I return – usually within an hour. 🙂
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I’m happy for you that you’ve found someone who doesn’t mind! 😃 They do say that opposites attract.
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I can verify that opposites attract! lol We try to meet in the middle.
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Tom said it best, for my takeaway… the weaving in of the ‘true’ reason for the trip in as subtle a manner as to not stop or even disrupt the narrative.
Nicely done!
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Thanks, Clark! 😊 I’m glad you thought it was well executed. I hoped to do the story of women in these situations justice.
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I hope things work out for them. The mother’s resolve is clear from beginning to end.
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I think Gramma and Gramps will make sure that they are safe and cared for.
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The bruise indicates a timely escape, Nicole! Although the question remains… will they go back?
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That depends on if her husband admits he was wrong, needs help, and checks himself into rehab, or not.
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A tall order? Maybe not. 🙂
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A serious situation calls for a serious response.
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Indeed!
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